“It’s a slow dive down / a fast distraction / a strange fall forward”

Dear Secondary Character Who I’m Liking More and More All the Time,

There. Right there. Page 90.

That’s where you cross the line you’re going to have to spend the rest of the book redeeming yourself from.

But hey, at least this pass I get why you need redeeming. In more than the last draft’s token way.


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