“I am your amulet / wish upon me”

Dear Other Secondary Character Who’s Been Remarkably Well Behaved Until Now,

Wait–you were supposed to be keeping that a secret!

No, I can’t think of any good reason you would continue to do so, under the circumstances. But there are some questions of pacing and tension we really should discuss before–what?

Yes, you’re quite right. Those are my issues, not yours. You have more important things to do than hang around helping me to resolve them.

Carry on (in your tense, tightly paced way),


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