“I start to wonder if what we have here /is really two poems, or three, or four, /or possibly none.”

Only for poems, substitute ravens.

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Dear Protagonist,

In this draft, you may make as many stupid mistakes as you want, yes.

In the next draft, I’ll expect you to start making smarter ones.

Sincerely,

Me

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9900 / 50000 words. 20% done!