When the critique group and the character agree, it’s time to pay attention

Dear Character I Really Like Quite a Bit, Not That You Can Tell From This Book,

Yes. Yes, you do have a point.

If I must break you, breaking you once would do.

Four times really is a bit excessive.

I’ll fix it in rewrite, I promise.



P.S. But this way we have choices. That’s good, right?

P.P.S. No, I don’t suppose that word does mean what I think it means.

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