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Dear Other Protagonist Whom I’m Becoming Reacquainted With After Long Absence,

Wow. You have absolutely no sense of humor. How could I have forgotten this?

No, no, don’t worry. I’m not going to change that now. I’m not even sure it’s a bad thing. It moves the plot, actually. I’d just forgotten, that’s all.

Don’t take it personally, please.




Dear Me,

Your revision letter suggested you might want to stop being repetitive about certain aspects of this story. This is an excellent point, and you’re working it. That’s good.

Except that you’re now repeating other things instead.

I don’t think that’s quite what that letter had in mind.

Just saying,


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