Specifically, feedback from James Joyce’s creative writing workshop. (Via makinglight and lnhammer.)

Truly felt I got to know Leopold (Poldy?). Nitpicky, logistical question: Is this really how people think?


Show us how these characters process memory, language, abstractions, and the urban landscape through stream of consciousness, don’t just tell us.

Complete with critiques that focus on commas and dashes instead of the larger story. 🙂

Also, I now have a myspace. Not my primary online home–that’s still livejournal–but another cyberspace outpost in case I ever want to make comments there, much like my blogspot account.

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